Enlgish project on Tinsley Carmicheal of the It Girl series?

I'm doing a book report project for English, due March 18th. You're suppost to make a collage of a character in a book and write a one page explanation of her. I chose Lucky, part of the It Girl series, and I'm writing about Tinsley. For the people who are fans of this series, do you think this is good so far? And what should I add on after this? Thanks閳?br>

Tinsley Carmicheal is the girl everyone loves to hate and hate to love. She閳ユ獨 known for being the leader of Waverly閳ユ獨 elite, throwing crazy but fantastic parties on and off Waverly campus, getting expelled from doing drugs, and has a reputation of being tremendously mean but fabulous at the same time. One minute she閳ユ獨 your best friend, and the next minute she閳ユ獨 trying to make your life miserable. Guys constantly drool over her, and freshmen girls tremble at her presence. People always wonder how and why she閳ユ獨 that powerful, even teachers. Described as having long dark hair and wild violet eyes, Tinsley is said to be the hottest girl in all of Waverly. She閳ユ獨 always fashion forward and sets hot trends as well- she is no wannabe. If everyone wore jeans and a polo, she would be wearing a sleek black dress and leggings. She wears nothing but top-designer clothing and accessories.

Enlgish project on Tinsley Carmicheal of the It Girl series?

yes its very good actually but you might want start another paragraph to add a little bit more about her backstabbing. shes an instigator. shes never in the action but the cause for all of the drama.to me she seems like a kind of fashion devil

good job read the next book it comes out soon its called Tempted; an it girl novel