How's this poem (persian poet , Hafiz) ?

I said I long for thee

You said your sorrows will end.

Be my moon, rise up for me

Only if it will ascend.

I said, from lovers learn

How with compassion burn

Beauties, you said in return

Such common tricks transcend.

Your visions, I will oppose

My mind's paths, I will close

You said, this night-farer knows

Another way will descend.

With the fragrance of your hair

I'm lost in my world's affair

You said, if you care, you dare

On its guidance can depend.

I said hail to that fresh air

That the morning breeze may share

Cool is that breeze, you declare

With beloved's air may blend.

I said, your sweet and red wine

Granted no wishes of mine

You said, in service define

Your life, and your time spend.

I said, when will your kind heart

Thoughts of friendship start?

Said, speak not of this art

Until it's time for that trend.

I said, happiness and joy

Passing time will destroy.

Said, Hafiz, silence employ

Sorrows too will end my friend.

How's this poem (persian poet , Hafiz) ?

Hafiz is the best, no doubt!!

How's this poem (persian poet , Hafiz) ?

wow i love poem's and that was really deep i loved it....

How's this poem (persian poet , Hafiz) ?

4 or 5 on a scale of 1 to 10 . . .was it originally written in Persian? If so, who did the translation?

Try some Forough Farrokhzad for some great Persian poetry.

How's this poem (persian poet , Hafiz) ?

who's the translator?

great job ... do you know if the same translator has had a go at Khayyams poems?